Pigeon Feedback

So, while the duotone idea can appear aggressive, it is quite hard to see from far away. The brands are hard to make out... What I'm going to do over the weekend is try my concept again, but on a black background with a full colour pigeon. That way, the brands are distinguishable, and perhaps, unappealing, in a good way. I will play around with the background as well. I'm going to explore ideas on how I can make a solid black background more interesting.